Shivanjali asked Ankita to meet her at a coffee shop. Shivanjali sounded very scared on the call.

Ankita got ready and tried to reach the café as quickly as possible. She saw Shivanjali standing near the entrance;  full of sweat and fear on the face.

“what happened to you ?” asked Ankita to Shivanjali.

“I don’t know what I was doing, but I just did it to save myself” replied Shivanjali.

“You are scaring me now, what did you do?” asked Ankita.

“Nitin was all drunk in the morning; he tried to kill me, he accused me of being a traitor and said that I was carrying someone else’s child and not his. I hit him with a glass bottle and ran out of the house in my defense.” Replied Shivanjali

“What do you mean? When did you get pregnant?  You never told me?“ Ankita was shocked.

“About two months ago, but the child is not his, I don’t know how he knew that?” Shivanjali replied with guilt in her eyes.

“Whose child is it Shivanjali? And why did you cheat on Nitin? He is the best husband anyone could have; you know how much everyone envies you?” Asked Ankita

“Everyone or just you? I know you tried to seduce Nitin. He told me all about it. With friends like you who needs an enemy? How many more Anikta? First, it was Ishan, then Arjun and now Nitin? You have become such a monster and Nitin is my husband for god’s sake. When will you learn to stay away from the men in my life? Asked Shivanjali with a different emotion in her eyes.

Ankita knew that this was a perfect time, she picked the bottle of acid, just when she was about to the throw the acid, someone hit her on the head. It was Nitin.

They left Ankita bleeding on the green grass, to save themselves from the monster she had become.

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Categories: Fiction


Keerthi Vydyula · October 23, 2017 at 7:33 pm

Okay! now u have successfully increased my curiosity to highest possible level! Was it pre-planned by Shivanjali and nithin?
Is it going to be a crime mystery??

zainab · October 23, 2017 at 10:17 pm

I want to know more. Dis she really cheat on Nitin?
Loved it.

Shalzmojo · October 24, 2017 at 8:51 am

Wow! this woman is really derailed; not that the couple arent either!! What lengths to go to take revenge?!!

Vinay Leo R. · October 24, 2017 at 10:01 am

Definitely need to know more of this story!

adodani · October 24, 2017 at 11:25 am

OH My GOD! Gripping. Need to know more more.

Aesha · October 24, 2017 at 6:01 pm

This is such a gripping story ! waiting eagerly for what happens next.

inkingexpressions · October 25, 2017 at 6:28 am

That was a story full of twists! But what’s the actual truth??

Sreedeep Chennamangalam · October 25, 2017 at 9:19 am

Oh wow, did not see that coming. Hoping there is more to this story. You’ve really put the reader on edge here!

thelazyparent · October 25, 2017 at 9:59 pm

Quick, racy and scary. Wow!

Apeksha Rao · October 26, 2017 at 4:58 pm

Ooh, very gripping! Love the twist.

Mahak @babyandbeyondin · October 27, 2017 at 6:51 am

She never did cheat on her husband right?

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